Friday, May 1, 2015

writing

I turn around and in front of my eyes is the most amazing scene . There is animals everywhere I can see tall giraffes,wrinkly elephants,stripy tigers, lions that are so fierce and kiwi sleeping in their burrows. There are also camels and a rhino. It’s as wild as the jungle in here. The first thing all the people went to look at was the only rhino that was  that is hanging the giraffes. There are also caretakers everywhere their Manley picking up poo !!. I can  see a beautiful water  by the elephant  I can also see a big palm tree by the other rhinos and they are just chilling and playing with each other .

1 comment:

  1. Amazing writing Bella you made it very Factfull. Next time wirte a bit more about th task.

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