Wednesday, November 9, 2016


Hello everyone its me again and today I am doing a literacy blog and I will be talking about all the things I do when I am in a literacy group hope you enjoy

In Literacy time at the beginning of every 2 weeks we get to choose a writing last week I chose retell My story will be down the bottom if you want to read it. Anyway for my writing I either had to choose a movie or a book to retell. You had to know the movie/book off by heart and know how to retell it. I choose the movie Miss peregrines home for peculiar children. It is all about this boy called Jake who lived with his granddad. one night the granddad gets killed by a mysterious creature. Well that is all I am going to do for today
Good bye

Miss Peregrine's home for peculiar children- Bella-Marie Taylor

Jake walked through the forest and found an old run down building. Jake decided to creep in.

As he went in and found a photo it was one of a family a Huge one he put it back down, and decided to look around more he went into a room and then he remembered “ wait this is the place that grandpa was talking about before we died it was the children's home a place for peculiar children” now that he new where he was we wanted to explore even more he decided to go upstairs. When he got up.

Jake walked into a room at the end of the room the was a girl that said “ abe?” Jake was so confused he started to run then he saw two more faces then he started to sprint he went down the stairs thru the kitchen he saw the greenhouse the way out but just before he got out he tripped onto a slab of concrete. When he woke up he was being cared by a little girl she dropped him “ OWWW wait a second your Emma and the twins  Olive and Bronwyn and your Miller how are you here you all died in 1943 a bomb dropped on you what a second am I dead.”

No well anyway we have to go into the loop were just waiting till the coast is clear you never know who could be watching.” They all walk into a mysterious cave and came out in the same place but in a different time…….


  1. WOW! Bella that is such a great piece of writing.You should write a story about the whole movie. This writing has really hooked me in and I really want to read more

  2. waw Bella did that take you for ever.